Once upon a time there lived a girl called Lily. Lily had 2 cats, 1 fish, 4 dogs, 2 rabbits and a guinea pig. Lily's parents did not like her pets so one night Lily crept out of the house and into the wood with all her pets behind her. Soon she came across a cave and decided to sleep there. Later on she fell asleep with her pets beside her. In the morning Lily woke to the sound of birds.At first she could not remember where she was. Next she decided to go for a walk. Soon she came across a little spring. Lily kneeled down and sipped the delicious cool water. After that she felt much better and had breakfast. Later on Lily became very lonely. Despite her pets company she had no-one to talk to.The next day On the way she saw a fox and ran off the path to have a closer look. Soon the fox jumped across a ditch. Lily wondered how to get across. In the end she saw it was impossible and returned home.Her parents were overjoyed to see her and were never mean to her pets again.
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Fantastic discriptive writing Imogen. Well done!
ReplyDeleteFantastic discriptive writing Imogen. Well done!
ReplyDeleteKaselle thought your story was interesting. Sofia says it's a great story. Lulu liked all the detail in your story.
ReplyDeleteKaselle thought your story was interesting. Sofia says it's a great story. Lulu liked all the detail in your story.
ReplyDeleteHi Imogen,
ReplyDeleteReally good work that you have put into your story. You have improved.
Did you go to England to see the foxes? I am from England.
Arlo
Room 7
Dear Imogen,
ReplyDeleteHow did you come up with the name of your story?
I liked how you explained how many pets you have.
From Trixie
Room 7